Writing practice: imagery
tears: condensed emotional overload
frozen emotions melting
[still too literal]
recovery seeds
[ok that’s at least a little better. recovery isn’t great, but seeds is a decent metaphor. try again with that. relate one aspect of seeds that applies to tears. i love embers of the hand because it’s two static images that conjure an action image]
emotional inkdrops
[ok but still focused on drops. still too literal. embers have nothing to do with gold]